still life (syntuit)

by Ben Pickard   Jun 3, 2021


Tail bent and buckled

Body painted with tyre marks

Roadside's red canvas

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Ben Pickard 2021

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  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    :) :)

    I read this recently in this column decided to write a belated critical analysis on it. Then, I changed my mined, decided to take it away. It was pointless. I hope he feels good.
    I am writhing this because someone asked.

  • 3 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Stunning piece beautiful!

  • 3 years ago

    by Hellon

    This was a real punch in the guts type of poem. Where I live we have lots of wildlife crossing the roads and we do slow down but , sadly, there's still too much road kill.

    • 3 years ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I said (rather darkly) to my family driving down the motorway, "The best place to see wildlife is at the side of the bloody road". Anyway, that gave me the idea for this.
      Thanks for reading, Hellon.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    This is just wow! Shocking but.. Yeah, I'm speechless, the other ladies have said it all xx

    • 3 years ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, both. Noura - I agree. Perhaps in a different way, but I do agree. Accidents are accidents, after all, and they can't be prevented. What is wrong is that innocents have to live in a world where those accidents have such tragic consequences. Where beauty is snuffed by such random events. You are right - it is wrong.

  • 3 years ago

    by nouriguess

    My heart sank and I was knocked sideways when I imagined this.

    Animals shouldn’t be hurt, even by accident. They shouldn’t die. They just should be fine. Always.

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