Comments : The Elephant, the seesaw and the Mouse (English Sonnet)

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Wow ! Haha this was definitely fun. Love the changes.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    You know how I feel about this <3 glad it's nominated,
    Take care,
    Em x

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Very fun, it made me smile. Congratulations :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Keira, I hope you are well..

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    You know I liked this, Michael. Well done indeed.

  • 3 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Hey Mr D. You know what I think about this but I'll go on record and say that I like this style of yours the best (humorous and silly) and in sonnet form it's fantastic. It reminds me of one of your old ones ... can't remember exactly how it went, but there were birds doing a little ditty and one fell off its perch?
    Really well done! :-) xx
    =^.^=