by Mr. Darcy
Often actions speak louder than words. The format reminds me of a timeline, looking/ hoping for proof of love, then in the absence of it, your desire for it stops! |
by Keira Pickard
I like the way you've written about pain, but also recovery. You made it clear on the last line that you're stronger than you were. Nice work:) |
by Ben Pickard
If that proof of love is not forthcoming, then learning how to be strong and independent is the next best thing - at least until someone worth your while arrives. |
by ddavidd
Sweet. Nice job |