Comments : unloved.

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Often actions speak louder than words. The format reminds me of a timeline, looking/ hoping for proof of love, then in the absence of it, your desire for it stops!

    Nice poem.

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I like the way you've written about pain, but also recovery. You made it clear on the last line that you're stronger than you were. Nice work:)

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    If that proof of love is not forthcoming, then learning how to be strong and independent is the next best thing - at least until someone worth your while arrives.
    A warm welcome to the site.

    Ben

  • 3 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Sweet. Nice job
    Love do not need proof , it is self evident.
    True love can't be temporary.
    Welcome to this site.