by Katrynn Jun 18, 2021
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Can't hear your voice, but |
by Keira Pickard
First of all, I love the '?' at the end of the title, haha. To answer that, you've got this perfectly and it definitely is a senryu - you even had me for a moment on the second line! I literally was sitting alone in a room and said really loudly, "wait . . . Is this wrong??." Then I checked it a couple more times, lol |
by Katrynn
Thanks:) |
by Mr. Darcy
Deafness went as |
by Katrynn
Yours is better than mine haha |