Deafness went as
your soul sang to mine, good, good
good, good vibrations

First of all, I love the '?' at the end of the title, haha. To answer that, you've got this perfectly and it definitely is a senryu - you even had me for a moment on the second line! I literally was sitting alone in a room and said really loudly, "wait . . . Is this wrong??." Then I checked it a couple more times, lol
Really good :)