Cold Feet

by Katrynn   Jun 19, 2021


Slight hesitation
I saw a glimpse of it and
It hurts my spirit
But I won't ask you to stay
Because I love you

K.M.L.C.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Katrynn

    Thanks for being nice, I can't see how anyone really likes this as it has ZERO rhyme or rhythm

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    The last two lines were as beautiful and hard hitting as they come. Really wonderful

  • 3 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    Here I saw the poet in you::
    "But I won't ask you to stay
    Because I love you"

    Love, here, evolves to an unselfish entity.
    You growing soul

  • 3 years ago

    by BOB GALLO


    Here I saw the poet in you::
    "But I won't ask you to stay
    Because I love you"

    Love, here, evolves to an unselfish entity.
    You growing soul

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