Empty (senryu)

by Katrynn   Jun 26, 2021


Hot tears trickle down
Leaving a dull, frozen heart
To fend for itself

    report violation
3


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Syllable count: correct. Fitting title without repetition in the main work: check. Heartstrings pulled: most certainly! Great senryu, Katrynn.

    All the best,
    Ben

    • 3 years ago

      by Katrynn

      Thanks Ben! Glad you liked it

More Poems By Katrynn

People Who Liked This Also Liked