living in my mirror, is a different version of me
today’s fellow, who does not quit measure up to yesterday
the physical discrepancy is one thing
but it’s the mental cognitivism that scares me
fear like a cancer grows, within the juices of self-doubt
blubbering like a witch’s brew
demanding action from me
time is stealing my shine
but I do want to grow old, that is fact
wearing a mask, hiding beneath the veneer becomes silly!
authenticity ,has value
self-love is a persuasion, drawing, out a shy fellow
onto this shirking stage, I take a bow
it has become a lonely road
bad news every other day
but within this ‘collated’ mind that I own
lives purpose and excitement
cheating the odds all that’s left now
who will have the last laugh?
I love the way you have penned this piece.
You have shown a deep sense of strength in the battle between mind, heart, and body.
I enjoyed the story of this poem, the way you took the reader on a journey within your mind where a war rages inside.
The hope for a better life, a better society, and a place of acceptance is well penned also.
You show many different sides of the coin in regards to life within this piece.
Each stanza helps tell a story of different emotions, good, bad, and middle of the road.
Compelling poem.
Keep it up.