Comments : I found it

  • 3 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Immediately, I love that question of if the moon is lonely. That's kind of a heartbreaking question, but maybe we want to find solace in nature, or maybe we realize that loneliness can transcend humans, that it can be felt in nature's core. And the comfort in being reminded of the stars.

    The idea that we're not broken, our heart might break and we may bend at the whim of all that the world tries to throw at us, but that doesn't mean we're broken. I love that. There's power in that.

    "I know I shouldn’t of made my home out of your bones but I felt safe there."

    - Such a beautiful line. It made me think of the terror and panic that can come in first trusting someone, then realizing they are truly there for you, and it's not a false foundation, not something that will aim to shake or break you.

    This was an incredibly intimate, especially in the sense of someone being patient with you while you learn to be gentle with yourself, while you weather your own storm. It's interesting that you wrote about this person not being the crutch, I liked that, a reminder that they were support and could also level with you. (oh one thing, "pedastool" should be "pedestal")

    Happy you have found a true and lasting love; this held such depth and I thank you for sharing this write!

    • 3 years ago

      by Lena

      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. It honestly means the world. I have not found this yet but it’s what I’m hoping I will find one day. Thanks again.