This is so wholesome, especially that last line. Love how much character and heart you've penned because of these prompts. The rhymes were lovely too (only thing I noticed was that chariot and Marriott don't exactly rhyme? Unless I'm pronouncing it wrong, but I assume that doesn't matter as much here because I read it as more easygoing rhymes, not strictly adhering to something). There's nostalgia and heartwarming memories here that you've opened up. Really enjoyed this one, Larry! |