Something about my heart

Passionately penned and from start to end it just drew me into your world..lovely!

Congrats on the Win!

Great to read another piece of yours! I love the passion in this, the realization that there is something almost like phenomena that happens when you are with him, that can't easily be explained, and it pulls you in and brings you peace at the same time. Helps you find "you".

"We talked till the rhythm
in my chest became a thunderstorm."

I can't get over how beautiful this verse is! Well done :)