Paradoxical II (Senryu)

by ddavidd   Oct 17, 2021


Just a touch of death
is what sometimes bring us back
to the existence.

    report violation
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  • 3 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    excellent!

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    wouldn’t it sound better if the second line said:

    sometimes it is what bring us?

    • 3 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks I think the problem is fixed now.

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