thanks i try my best on my quotes

Hey nice poem :) confusing situation and a tough choice... go with your heart... :) wish you the best :)

Awe great poem, Keep writing
Love,

-Blue

Wow! That is exactly what my state was.. Hope i have recovered. But still i feel bad for choosing one and hurting the other. But i had too. I really understand what you said. Because i went through this. ITs so difficult. Only time can make you sure what to do. Just listen to your heart! IT was a great poem. Well expressed. Keep writing.. Don't waste your talent ever.
(i have a poem called "My dreams went on" something similar to this poem..)..Love, Trincy.

just to let you knoew your the onlt person thats said anything bad about the poem and it not even mine a freind wrote it for me

ps the whole heywood utossmysalad thing is gay its heywood jublowme.

dont listen to people like that, youre poem was great. a very tough dicission to make, but good luck with everything.

Best of luck in your decision. Enjoyed reading your poem.

This was a pretty good poem. I thought you did a pretty good job keeping your rhyme scheme intact without make unnatural rhymes and sentence constructions. However, some of your lines are much longer than others, and that sort of disrupted the rhythm of the poem. I would work on standardizing the rhythm. Good work.

not very poem rhymes most poems do but some dont .

tank u

Hey Jackie, it's Hannah. I thought this poem was excellent. Hope all goes well. Keep writing and I hope to read more.

thanks

It feels as if you wrote it for me. I can really relate to this. Its excellent. :-)

thanxs i do my best

WOAH!! GREAT POEM!! IT BLEW ME AWAY!! AND THAT HEYWOOD OR W/E DUDE CAN SUCK IT UP THAT YOU GOOD AND HE SUCKS!!!...woah sry my temper get over reached alot! great job writing buhbyez-Kels

wow!that was beautiful...very beautiful!

Great poem. Keep up the good work. I know how you feel though I've been there too many times.

an amazing piece! i hope it all worked out well for you, keep up the good work! :)beanxx

awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

thanx