Comments : Phantom

  • 3 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    First line, "as" should be "has" I believe? I liked how you mention that it isn't just the ghost of your memory, or a shadow of what used to be. Everything you witnessed and heard and saw is present, won't leave you and is harder to even let go. Powerful emotions here.

    • 3 years ago

      by Love

      Thank you for catching that! And thank you for your input. (Hugs)

  • 3 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Very sad and enchanting. There is some tingy feeling of longing and helplessness in those lines that touch deep down. Well done.

    Also, I think Its should be It's in the following line

    "Its the echoing replica of your voice "