Glad to see this engaging write nominated - good luck!

You always have a way to uniquely present your emotions, in such a wonderfully flowing piece with rhymes. This made me think of the limits we have as humans, and when we're pushed too hard, it's almost like this world can't contain all of us. Perhaps we drift and dream to cope. Or we are mentally, that close to the edge, which is really hard to put into words. On the brink of life and death, and wondering if we'll be stuck in between, or what is waiting for us, if there are other dimensions where our pain is not as great. Really thought-provoking piece here, Obscure, so happy to see this win!