by Star Nov 26, 2021
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
When the clouds |
Such a dreamy, introspective write! (Which I seem to see a lot of your pieces as). I love how you personified this, and that it made me think of the symbolism of "your sky", perhaps being your soul? Wanting some relief, some shelter from everything that burns you out in life. And not necessarily wanting rain, but wanting something to quench you. I think clouds can often be an ominous sign (if it's a particular type of cloud, which I don't know the differences between them haha), and what it can signify, like an oncoming storm. But you've found a home in them. Whether that's a temporary comfort, a security blanket, like staying in your zone and space you know, or learning to take whatever life comes your way. I can't get over the first line too, about clouds holding memories, and this line particularly: |
by Star
You're actually close with what I had in mind while writing this. Do you know how sometimes you feel so many emotions and they're intense (like you become so happy about the simplest things), then others you feel nothing at all? It's like you have two different people inside of you, in two opposite sides of the spectrum. I hope this makes sense lol |