Comments : A Crystal Ocean of Love

  • 2 years ago

    by Xaque

    Vivid descriptions reflect the passion the writer clearly poured into the piece. The lines that gripped me the most were:
    "Laid before is a love unendingly tender,
    Passed the sky with painted colors fluttering;"
    Not only were these lines vivid, but they were emotionally gripping as well.
    I also enjoyed the fluency of the scheme, it made the piece more dramatic. Very enjoyable, good read by this writer.