A comment in the other site I use it her as a good introduction::

Dr. Zhue - "I love how you took the play A Streetcar Named Desire and then wrote a poem in the perspective of Shep Huntleigh (or what Blanche DuBoise imagines him to be). Your first line is so compelling and immediately confirms to familiar readers that this poem is, in fact, based on the play. I also like how you did a little play on words "wash your heir" in stanza 9. One critical thing I'd like to point out is that the large variation in line and stanza sizes is distracting, though it may have been intentional. "