A wave of pain
As she tells me her ways
My confidence low
With no hope
We were promised that they would always have our side
Unless we do something they don’t feel is right
I’m telling you
I’m asking you
And repeating my rhymes
I’m a broken chime
That ripples with time
Trying to tell you my side
No acceptance but that’s fine
But the words that your slipping ruin my mind
Tear down the trust
Tear down the fun
Tear down my life
With the phrases your repeating
With no open mind
I’m talking to a wall
With no regard to my feelings at all
Hey Rio, warm welcome to PnQ!
I want to say that we have all been there, the time when we were hurt by the person we trusted so much, but that of course does not make it any less painful. I like the title of the poem, you comparing the person to a wall. A sad poem and you expressed it well!