by BOB GALLO
It is exquisite dear Angel, though the syllabus count do not match, the second line is 8 and the third four. Perhaps by altering it a little you could change it. A suggestion for example:: |
Thank you so much! This was a second try with the Haiku! Noted and I have already amended the poem with your suggestion. :D |
by BOB GALLO
You are doing very fine. A very talented poet already nominated one of your haikus. |
I am already in cloud nine now!! Thank you so much |