Comments : Purple (Haiku)

  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    It is exquisite dear Angel, though the syllabus count do not match, the second line is 8 and the third four. Perhaps by altering it a little you could change it. A suggestion for example::

    Beautiful, purple
    calm solitary twilights
    our salient nights

    • 2 years ago

      by The Fallen Angel

      Thank you so much! This was a second try with the Haiku! Noted and I have already amended the poem with your suggestion. :D

  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    You are doing very fine. A very talented poet already nominated one of your haikus.
    I would have also if I were a senior member.