Comments : Capacity

  • 2 years ago

    by Xaque

    The writer uses a distinct style to create a vivid tone throughout the piece. The language feels raw and vulnerable, connecting the reader to the poem deeply. My favorite stanzas were

    "unadorned options of
    others left memories pasted
    with gloom upon the walls"

    and

    "tasting then consuming
    my innocence leaving their scraps
    like leftovers on a plate

    leaving me
    to lick the wounds from"

    An excellent and powerful piece

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Xaque for your lovely comments :) and for reading