by Katrynn
Really interesting to see the connection between the touchable and untouchable in this poem. One of my favorites of yours :) |
by Star
Thank you so muck Katrynn :) |
There's something about this piece in particular that feels especially unique. I think each line is very strong, and there are morsels of sadness tucked in that linger after I'm done reading. I really see those opening lines clearly. Someone holding the flower, you holding on to the root like an anchor. Relying on that person to water them in the hopes you would feel you belong, too. I love how you describe it: |
by Star
Thank you so much for this amazing comment ^_^ |