NaPoWriMo Day 3

by Everlasting   Apr 4, 2022


my senses can sometimes betray me

some days my ears can hear what my eyes cannot see
some days my mouth can taste what my nose cannot smell

i supposed our senses too need some sort of check in balance

i supposed. i supposed

Thus, i rely on as many senses as i possibly can
prior to making an assumption

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  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    i some times feel that the need to talk is a wonder, yet also a curse. I would like to rely on my 5 senses, without a need to be able to speak!

    Nicely done. M :)

  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    you reminded me of the old philosophical trick to discredit the accuracy of our senses (empirical)
    It is by putting one finger in cold water and the other in hot, then taking both fingers(hands) out and put them both in a mild water to experience how unreliable ( relative actually) our senses are.

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