Bladder prison

by mistake   Apr 18, 2022


I stare into the bottomless hole,
Before flushing away part of my soul.
Away it goes, trundling away.
Goodbye fluids, I drank today.
Enjoy your life away from me.
Go, begone! I set you free.
Into the world, it’s time to mix,
Perhaps, to escape other vaginas and d**ks.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Well, good bye liquids. I hope the fluids may like the other worlds they will encounter during their travel. Wonder if those fluids may think of the toilet flushing as some sort of black hole?

    Also, I wonder if whatever we flush are really the liquids we drank that day or if it’s liquids that we drank other days?

    I mean, most likely some of the fluids drank today will be flushed but I’m sure some of them may be retain in the body. I mean, how would you explain cellulite?

    • 2 years ago

      by mistake

      You are absolutely right, except the retaining part doesn’t affect what is flushed away in the end.

      I really enjoy that you give much more fleshed out comments than I do, and because of that I will try to write a cellulite poem, before I dive into your poetry, which I am very much looking forward too after reading your great comments! =)

  • 2 years ago

    by mistake

    There is nothing offensive in the way I used the word d**ks, but I understand.

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