Comments : Past

  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    well, I marched past this poem
    Before the poem past me
    Imagine what would happened if the poem past me?
    i wouldn’t have known that all that’s good is past
    And that I should enjoy the past before it’s past
    This past is present indeed
    so present … in this poem I marched past

    • 2 years ago

      by mistake

      Thank you for the comment, the kind that gives more than just a comment.

      I’m glad to see you seem to have understood my thought process in this one very well. Wanted to go with something like John Agards half-caste, but with the rose tinted glasses and that we sometimes don’t realise we are in good times until they’re... well, past.

      Thanks again for the deeper than normal feedback!