Comments : Sensiferous

  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    This poem is so spacious in its feeling despite its size. Your work are so minimal like haiku.
    Sorry for me touching your words, just trying to make a point. Something like this :

    Sometimes the sunsets
    are synonymous with a
    selcouth silence, sigh!

    Of course you can polish it further if you choose to. Just a suggestion because it is perfect in its own.

    • 2 years ago

      by Aegis

      I totally understand where you're coming from. But I put a lot of thought into every single aspect of each piece I publish, including the layout of the words. For me, this is often the best layout. And besides, I've kind of adopted it as part of my style. Thank you though for your input:)