Twisted Love Story

by Eibutsina   Jul 14, 2004


I should have listened to my parents knowing they'd be right,
But I went ahead and defied them I got in your car that night,
They thought my man was trouble and a bad influence,
Fact he was from the lower class and our was a family of affluence.

They tried everything to keep us apart,
But we could not help but follow the ways of the heart,
That day i told them I loved you and I took a stand,
I was leaving to be with you and one day they'd understand.

Ran out in the cold and jumped in your car,
Told you of how my family couldn't accept what we are,
We'll leave and start our own lives far far away,
Don't worry baby they'll understand one day.

But you were quite, not a single word,
I felt as though my promises went unheard,
You took me by the face and kissed my lips so sweet,
Don't worry baby girl you know it was our fate to meet.

And they could never make me let go of my love for you,
I'm speeding really fast now so I can prove it too,
So give me one last smile to last me for all time,
No one and nothing can stop you, from forever and always being mine.

Before I even knew, your car was in the air,
Watching the ocean beneath us you held my hand with such care,
Everything went black as we crashed into the ground,
Apparently the wreck and our bodies were never ever found.

Our families wonder what the hell went wrong,
Couldn't we have found a solution and all got along,
What drove there children to commit suicide,
They visit with roses every year near the cliff where we died.

Because they wouldn't let us be together and share a life,
But we weren't as foolish for all this to sacrifice,
See it was all part of our master plan,
So I could live happily with my man,

And lying within the oceans depth,
Is the secret to how we faked our death....

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  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thanks for comments - girls love ya!

  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wow i actually had to laugh at that one...Like you faked your death to be with your man! tahts awsome..Sorry your parents couldnt except the fact you loved him i know the feeling....But that was another awsome poem! This one is like my second favorite of yours! GREAT JOB! I know you'll keep it up!

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Thanks orignally when i started writing this one i had a completely different idea and topic in mind but this is what i ended up with - glad you liked and thanks for the feedback i look forward to returning the favour!

  • 20 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow! I am speechless! That was an amazing poem. Haven't read anything like it on this sight. You are very talented!!! Keep writing!!!!