by Everlasting Jul 28, 2022
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
it is like it is |
by BOB GALLO
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by Everlasting
Sorry, I’ve been trying to get to this comment but ahhh… kiddos, husband speak to me when I’m philosophizing. I can’t concentrate. I either give up sleep and finish philosophizing or I choose to sleep. If I do not sleep, I pay the consequences…health wise… not pretty. |
by BOB GALLO
To write poem about rules we must mind the expanse of the meaning of rule. Their are infinite rules and there are human rules trying to imitate those rules. So, "ruling the rules" is a bit clumsy, if it is not incorrect. We could make some rules,(human rules) but we must be obedient by those rules too, but we could not rule them after they are the rules. In the rules of nature even worst, the only thing that we could rule is ourselves (it is called volition or will) . |
by BOB GALLO
Luce, coming to think of it there are other ways also t0 interpret this. Sorry for being closed minded in my last comment. You were probably talking about mastering the rules to take advantage of them for our benefits, the way we manipulate the rules of nature to our will. All i wanted to say was the subject doesn't leave so mach space to swing but still shows flexibility of mind and spirit if we could do it in such tied space. |
by Everlasting
Yeah, your second comment is what I meant. |
by BOB GALLO
Edited |
by Meena Krish
Interesting write/ read and I agree the ending stanza has a good strong ending! |
by Everlasting
Thank you |
by Star
For some reason your title reminded me of toysRus lol! |
by Everlasting
Lol i can see how! |