Forgiveness

by Sunshine   Aug 6, 2022


One night,
I just woke up naked on the inside.
It was an eerie evening,
or so I thought.
Cold wrapped my dead skin
with life and soul.
Haven't you wished that
I'd sincerely acquit you?
with all my heart & conscience..
I did.
One eerie night,
I just woke up
on the inside,
and I was so bare of you.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Good Enough

    oooooo you sent chills down my spine with this writing! The last line was the cherry on top. Thank you for always being an inspiration

  • 2 years ago

    by Kate

    I agree. The last line is so powerful and has so much weight to it. What an impactful ending. A wonderful write.

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    That ending line - I can't get over! Going to come back to this in a few days. I love the meaning of forgiveness here. And it makes me think how we all perceive forgiveness. Sometimes, it's with relief, and we feel warm and ready to move on. Other times, I feel there's a coldness, an emptiness, something we can't explain. I don't ever feel like forgiveness is owed - it's such a personal thing already. Great to see a new poem from you <3

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