Stillwater

by El_Mabini Oct 21, 2022 category : Sadness, depression / about death

He just disappeared.
as the water remained still,
no bubble appeared .

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2 years ago
by BOB GALLO

This sounds good but I can not get the poetical intent.
Seems you are just breezing in your thought using haiku schema. But there is definitely something here