Perfect! The third stanza is beautiful! Keep up with your good works!

beautiful

What a marvelous poem

It touches my heart!

A physical chemical interaction. Hm.. nice and accurate!

What a romantic poem????????

Who is the lucky one who falls into your arms to let you hug?
make it tight, don't fall.

Our life is in our hands,let us seize the opportunity ourselves!

So romantic

Very beautiful and romantic poem!Hope you can find the best new love.

So romantic,Love it!

Awwww so lovely!

Awwww so lovely!

Awwww so lovely!

This poem touched my heart, cried while
reading this

The view of the stars must be beautiful

You kids have done a great job on this challenge. This poem is nominated for the weekly contest.