Comments : Saw you from the outside

  • 1 year ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    writing this poem must have been cathartic for you for sure. Often being in a relationship is literally being 'inside' and it's only when you escape, or are forced to that you see it from a different perspective. So revealing, right!

    Thanks for sharing.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ink

    Very strong write, I think many people can relate to it, I particularly liked the opening line, completely sets the tone of the poem. Regards Ink