i have to admit, i didnt like the poem a lot... i like the subject... its how i feel about my boyfriend... but you need to use more descriptive words and make it more elaborated. i think you have the potential to make this poem better... so why not go back and fix it! keep working on it...

Cool poem. This is how you really feel and you put it into a poem. That is what makes a poem realy good. Check out mine when you have the time.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very touching to my heart... Very BEAUTIFUL..... I am getin married in June 06.... 5/5

I feel the same way about my bf

Just dropping in and leaving you a comment, baby. Meh. I was mad at my little borth just a few seconds ago then I read your poems and got happy. =] And now I miss you. But this poem is great! **5/5** baby. Hope you get online later. =]

Love
Christina.xx

P.s. You spelt "marriage" wrong.
=]

Sweetttt....
keep writting