I appreciated the 'play on words' double meaning title.

The poem/ rap elevates the imagery, helps the reader (me) see himself tucking money into G-strings, becoming intoxicated by the sexual energy. The twist, of stripper chasing punter is a clever one, not one I would have expected. The idea of a punter playing the long game is not something I could see myself doing, but it seems in this case, that's where the real rewards lay. Nicely paced and refreshing, too!

Holy shit this poem gripped me from beginning to end. This is easily my favorite poem I've read of yours so far. It's definitely going into my favorites. The rhythm and rhyming were outstanding.

Linda, my dear friend. The rhyming in this was on point, some of the best I've ever seen. The flow was pure perfection and the story so gripping. You are a master at keeping me hooked. Awesome. Love, x