borrowed breath

I love short poems for some reason. Wonderfully written.

This is well written and your choice of words made it like I'm watching this scene play out; and that's the beauty and power of it!

This poem is fantastic! Sometimes a poem doesn't need to be long or detailed to have an impact. The imagery is stunning and the wordplay is perfect for the story you wanted to tell here.

What a powerful write... Your closing was brilliant... thx for the read