Invert (Senryu)

by BOB GALLO   Feb 26, 2023


Colours dazzle in
the daylight but light dazzles
only in the night.

    report violation
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  • 1 year ago

    by Koan

    I wonder what made you write this..?
    I love that you repeated "dazzle" by ending your second line with it. Really amplifies the depth of your closing line... Bravo!

    • 1 year ago

      by BOB GALLO

      What an observation!! You read poetry well.
      Thank you Koan

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