This is an excellent and well written double etheree. I loved the wordplay and the story you told. The rhyming was spot on too! Nominated

I’ve actually never read a poem like this before but I enjoyed it. Esp the line “yet, in my walled mind I remain confined.” I absolutely loved that piece.

So cool. I miss writing form poetry. Actually, I think I’ve have spent most of my time reading research about vitamins. I do need a break from that. Thanks for the inspiration

Mr.Darcy,

First, I like the way your poem formed into a diamond shape..I literally count every syllables.lol..secondly the depth of the content, is like a fine silk weaved by professional hand or should I say, Astonishing...

Gel