by Rayven
Nominated! The feelings you portrayed though out the poem were well written but heavy, as the reader I could feel everything that you put down, You never strayed from the poem at any time and I liked that, it made it easier to read. |
I feel like this will apply to a lot of people. Anxiety and overthinking can become one’s biggest enemy. |
by Paul Stotts
This is so true!!! Getting lost in the rabbit hole of overthinking can be so difficult. It can take a huge toll on mental health. I've learned to let a lot go, to just enjoy life, at the end of each night, the mysteries of the universe are still hidden, The biggest questions of science are still left to study, the world is a beautiful mess. |
by Kips2.0
This is packed with deep feelings and emotions. Keep writing! |