by Cantchangeme Mar 10, 2023
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Weightless upheld in the ether |
“You’re a real Romeo right after” - love that line. |
by Rayven
Nominated! I really like the poem as a whole and the message you put across here! It is difficult to bare the hardships of life but once we become free from those hardships life becomes better! I also loved the subtle rhyming throughout, I thought it really enhanced the poem itself. |