What a lovely poem. The presentation with the special characters separating each stanza, is wonderful, quite pleasing. As for the content, you took me on a step by step account of your 1st kiss, the physical act and mental act, too. It was almost as I were being kissed. Super stuff, Gel.
Mr. Darcy,
You literally made me laugh out loud...By the way thank you for the hilarious comment I'm still laughing right now...that's what I want my readers to feel my words and my story..thank you big time...