Oh I really like this poem! I love your voice in the narrative, very heartfelt, open and honest. I can totally relate to this feeling as I'm sure others would too. Regards Ink.

I like the picture you paint in this one!

So lovely, Evi. It's direct and fresh, enjoyable to read and with nice contrasts of words, but my favourite aspect is the closing verses relating to the beginning line. ? Delightful work.