by Walter Jul 18, 2023
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Barefoot in nature |
by Ben Pickard
This excellent, Walter, and the title really is clever. It's that sneaky fourth line a little imagination allows for in a haiku. Anyway, do mind the bees if you insist on cavorting barefoot on the grass! |
by Walter
Thank you Ben for your comment and yes, let's take bees out of the equation! |
by Obscure
The last line makes me think of either relaxing on grass or fighting the grass, both ways would help get rid of tension but I like the possibility of more than one meaning! |
by Walter
Thanks Obscure for reading and commenting. And a very good interpretation! |