Comments : On A Knife-Edge - Haiku

  • 1 year ago

    by Obscure

    The last line makes me think of either relaxing on grass or fighting the grass, both ways would help get rid of tension but I like the possibility of more than one meaning!

    • 1 year ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Obscure for reading and commenting. And a very good interpretation!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This excellent, Walter, and the title really is clever. It's that sneaky fourth line a little imagination allows for in a haiku. Anyway, do mind the bees if you insist on cavorting barefoot on the grass!
    Stay well

    • 1 year ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Ben for your comment and yes, let's take bees out of the equation!