August Thirst (haiku)

by James Rockwell   Aug 5, 2023


Rain drops from above
Gently quench a dry meadow
Enliven lilies

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  • 10 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Now that's another image you've painted well with your words. Well penned!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is lovely work, James, and the title is fabulous too. A good man on this site once told me that you could use the title in a senryu or haiku as 'a sneaky fourth line'. Anyway, you do that brilliantly here.
    Take care

    • 1 year ago

      by James Rockwell

      Thank you so much, Ben, for your comment and your kind words!
      All the best,
      J.R.

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