Comments : Into the deep blue.

  • 1 year ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    It's rare to see you use rhymes in your writing, but I love this one.

    --- MKKK

    • 1 year ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Thank you! And yes, I wasn't even planning on rhyming at first, then I thought it'd be a neat challenge. But it's open for critique too if certain parts could flow better. I struggle with rhyming!