the remains within the ashes

by Star   Oct 8, 2023


the drizzling of promises to
herself have failed her.

she wrestles with inconsistent
insecurities, as they flush
her every time in an ocean
of unsolved equations.

repulsion became her friend,
as Night mumbles with her
soul tragic stories of a future
they both created.

the Day is no longer mending,
as he now is holding hands
with Night

for she was looking for continuity
within herself,

but she fails to belong.

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  • 1 year ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    First of all, I love the use of 'unsolved equations' and 'inconsistent insecurities'. I love how you capitalized Night & Day, giving them relevance and personas. Enjoyed reading this.

    --- MKKK

    • 1 year ago

      by Star

      Thank you!

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