Comments : Forget me (please do) not

  • 1 year ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Another rhyming piece from you. You're nailing it though. Love the play in the title, also the last stanza. Great job!

    --- MKKK

    • 1 year ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Thank you so much, you're too kind with your comments! And I hope to catch up on your poems, soon.

  • 1 year ago

    by Darren

    I don't know, I go away for a few years only to return and find MA rhyming.
    Must be a parallel universe.
    Loved this.

    • 1 year ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      DARREN!! The way I about screamed when I saw this! It's so wonderful to see you back and thank you for the comment. Also, I go by Elliott now (or El for short). Changed my name last year :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Eros

    The succession of questioning transmit a feeling of unquietness at the heart, too much worries and too much anxiety. I feel you, even though I don't relate, and that's how I know you've done a great job at making your feelings clear.

  • 1 year ago

    by Midnight Hellebore

    I love this! The accusatory intensity increases as you near the end. Well written.