Comments : Lesson to learn?

  • 9 months ago

    by David

    such raw emotion, the end of your poem is the perfect prequel to the last paragraph of my poem
    "Love that little bit more"
    "There are good days and bad please reflect my friend
    Be grateful for the beginning, middle and end
    So without trying times that hurt to your core
    You wouldn’t appreciate the good, and love that little bit more.."

    This poem could nearly be classified as sad/heartbreak poem too, great poem!