Comments : Dream vs Reality Both are illusions!

  • 7 months ago

    by BOB GALLO


    I don't think it is available for everyone the amount of enlightenment, self discovering, and wisdom in this write.
    It is so overwhelming that even the very poet is struggling to voice what he is discovering. He repeats on an on , the same thing, because each time , the self discovery, is not enough for him. He has to dig more into it, into himself!!

    this piece is very good document of self discovery but in order to be come a real poem a work of art, the writer has to seasoned more to the enlightened new world he discovers and then eliminate the repeats. and feel how comfortable it is to express what he so beautifully discovers.