Tiny Fingers - Senryu
by Gem May 24, 2024
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Such tiny fingers |
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6 months ago
by Kiko
This is a strong senryu. If you were to dispense with the out-of-date 5-7-5 formula, it could be made a little stronger:
Tiny fingers
that barely hold a bottle
have seized my heart-
6 months ago
by Gem
I had no idea the formula had changed haha. When did that happen and what's the new one? :D
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6 months ago
by Kiko
There are entire books on how to write haiku and senryu. It is a wonderful art form. Counting syllables 5-7-5 is an oversimplification that has gradually diminished over time.
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